(As it is now)
In those days, before having found the high fat content in black olives, we used to eat many of them.
Before black olives were considered unhealthy due to high fat content, we ate lots of them.
Until black olives had a high fat content we used to eat many of them.
Black olives were consumed in high numbers before the high fat content bad name was given.
第1题:
in some schools where they
some schools are where they
some schools implemented programs that
programs in some schools were where they
in some school programs they
第2题:
Especially
Usually
Generally
Fortunately
第3题:
east iron firings
mild steel fittings
small fittings
large fittings
第4题:
(As it is now)
His aspiration was to discover where we get our gender identity from, to see for ourselves how women are treated in our society.
His aspiration, to discover the roots of gender identity, and to see how women are treated for himself.
His aspiration was to discover the roots of gender identity and experience firsthand the way women are treated.
His aspiration was to discover the roots of gender identity and to personally experience the treatment of women by men.
第5题:
those symptoms were
their depression was
the victims were
chronic fatigue syndrome was
they were
第6题:
(as it is now)
the qualifications and skills of the candi- dates, but instead
what kinds of qualifications and skills the candidates might have, they instead
the qualifications and skills of the candi- dates, they
what are the qualifications and skills of the candidates, they instead
第7题:
the lobsters still lack both hard shells and fierce claws with which to fend off predator
the lobsters cannot attack their fish and crab predators with fierce claws or fend their predators off with a hard shell
they don't have a hard shell yet and can't defend themselves with fierce claws yet
the lobsters don't have a hard shell and can't yet defend themselves with fierce claws
the fish and crabs do not have hard shells or fierce claws yet
第8题:
replacing They with For instance, we are inclined to
replacing that spirits with about spirits
deleting that live in wood
replacing have to be with would have been
replacing or with but
第9题:
(As it is now)
They are saying that it is
For example, it is, these scientists say,
These scientists believe we adopt superstitions
Furthermore, the scientists say it is
第10题:
The superstitions seeming silly to non- believers who don't share them, however to believers those rituals provide a sense of control over otherwise unsettling situations.
They seem silly to those nonbelievers who don't share the superstitions, but the rituals providing a sense of control over otherwise unsettling situations to believers.
Although such superstitions may seem silly to nonbelievers, to believers those rituals provide a sense of control over otherwise unsettling situations.
Instead of the superstitions seeming silly to those who don't believe in them, these rituals give believers a sense of control to situations otherwise unsettling.
They may seem silly to nonbelievers who don't share the superstitions, hence those rituals provide a sense of control to believers over otherwise unsettling situations.
第11题:
today have hardly even 1 hour for such things
today, unlike those in Archimedes’ time, don’t have time to go to the movies
today don’t have time for such excursions
of modern times lack sufficient time for the kinds of things explained above
today lack sufficient time for things like this
第12题:
after sentence 2
after sentence 3
after sentence 4
after sentence 5
after sentence 6
第13题:
(as it is now)
It is the surprising fact that incentive don’t always work like they’re supposed to.
What is surprising, incentives don’t always work like they should.
Incentives don’t always work as they should, it is surprising.
Surprisingly, incentives don’t always work as they should.
第14题:
A sentence listing mundane tourist attractions available on the East Coast, inserted after sentence 2
A sentence offering an overview of the attractions that Branson offers, inserted after sentence 4
A sentence explaining the settlement of the Ozarks and the founding of Branson, after sentence 4
A sentence listing recent statistics regarding annual in-state visitors versus out-of-state visitors to Branson, inserted before sentence 5
A sentence listing the annual tourist revenues in the city of Branson, inserted before sentence 6
第15题:
(as it is now)
and was sending out many resumes however all he was getting was rejection
and sent out many resumes, but all he received was rejection
and sending out many resumes, however he got rejected only
and, after many resumes having been sent, rejection was his only result
第16题:
Growing up as part of a Greek American family that takes its cuisine very seriously, I was exposed heavily to many of the classic Greek foods: olives, feta cheese, and stuffed grape leaves to name a few.
The olive tree is among the oldest known cultivated trees in the world.
In the past several hundred years the olive has spread to North and South America, Japan, New Zealand and Australia.
My experience with olives started when I was very young.
People living in the Mediterranean area who use olive oil as their main source of fat have surprisingly low susceptibility to heart disease.
第17题:
(As it is now)
Composer Jonathan Larson created the musical Rent in 1996, it takes much of the storyline and characters from La Boheme.
Much of the storyline and characters from La Boheme were included in Rent, which is a musical created by composer Jonathan Larson in 1996.
Rent, a musical by composer Jonathan Larson in 1996, was created by using much of the storyline and characters from La Boheme.
Composer Jonathan Larson created the musical Rent in 1996 using much of the storyline and many of the characters from La Boheme.
第18题:
The vibrant costumes and black leather jackets, reflected the 1950’s, the time period Lurhmann uses.
The black leather jackets and other vibrant costumes echo the 1950’s, the time period Lurhmann used in his production.
Lurhmann uses black leather jackets and other vibrant costumes of the 1950’s in his production to suggest the time period of the production.
The vibrant costumes, and jackets imitated those of the 1950’s, the time period Lurhmann uses in his production.
The black leather jackets and other vibrant costumes reproduced the time period of the 1950’s of which Lurhmmnn uses in his production.
第19题:
On the other hand,
Furthermore,
Another issue is the fact that
To my knowledge,
Consequently,
第20题:
(as it is now)
the process of choosing a homecoming queen
that of choosing a homecoming queen
The way you choose a homecoming queen
choosing a homecoming queen
第21题:
(As it is now)
Safe but not boring. A good combination.
It’s safe but not boring, which is a good combination.
It’s safe but not boring; therefore it was a good combination.
Safe but not boring and a good combination.
第22题:
(As it is now)
In those days, before having found the high fat content in black olives, we used to eat many of them.
Before black olives were considered unhealthy due to high fat content, we ate lots of them.
Until black olives had a high fat content we used to eat many of them.
Black olives were consumed in high numbers before the high fat content bad name was given.
第23题:
However, doctors treat the symptoms with the cure for CFS.
Currently, doctors treat the symptoms because there is no cure for CFS.
But doctors know there is no cure and because of that they treat the symptoms.
Since there is no cure for CFS, doctors treat the symptoms without the cure.
When there are symptoms, doctors treat them without the cure for CFS.
第24题:
it seems that your brain gets frozen
one’s brain gets frozen
your brain seems to freeze
your brains seem to freeze
one’s brain seems to freeze