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正确答案:
May 9th, 2012
Dear Sir or Madam,
①I’m writing to you for the walkman I bought fromyour corporation a month ago. ②There’s something wrong with it. ③It can’t work any more. ④The electric power is still on, butthe wheel doesn’t move. ⑤It is not supposed to be broken down in such a short timeafter it was bought.
⑥Since the walkman has only been used for a month, it is still in the period of the half-year warranty. ⑦SoI mail the walkman to youin the hope of getting it repaired or replaced.
⑧Enclosed are the invoice and the warranty. ⑨There is also a calling card with my telephone number and address on. ⑩If you have any questions, contact me please.
Sincerely yours,
John Smith
解析:
①②开篇点明投诉缘由
③④详细说明发生的情况
⑤表达自己的不满
⑥⑦⑧提出补救措施
⑨⑩留下自己的联系方式