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【参考范文】
Juvenile Delinquency
Recently, there has been a sharp increase in juvenile delinquency. Careful deliberation of this problem has given me several ideas as to why this should be so.
First of all, with the rising divorce rate, some children are not properly taken care of, and are easily led astray by evildoers. What is more, inexperienced and gullible young people plunge into the illusory world of computer games, on-line chat or even pornography. Such alienation from proper social values is the slippery slope to crime.
In my view, the whole society should attach great importance to the sound growth of youngsters. Besides, proper guidance and protection of adults and schools are vital to teenagers. In all, we should exert every effort bring down the juvenile crime rate in a short while.
解析:
【范文点评】
文章第一段概述近年来少年犯罪有增长的趋势。第二段分析了造成这一现状的原因来自家庭教育的疏忽以及少年沉迷于网络游戏等不健康的活动中,价值观有缺失。最后作者提出建议,应该全社会行动起来关心少年成长,给予他们应有的引导和保护,这样才能降低少年犯罪发生的概率。